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The Last Song of Sheshonq

by | May 9, 2025 | Religious Fiction

This scroll was written with ink, memory, and modest sponsorship.

The Last Song of Sheshonq

Chapter 1: Shadows Over the Nile

The Nile’s waters reflected the waning light, gilding the mudbrick walls of Thebes in a molten glow. Henut, a scribe of modest lineage, paused on the temple steps, papyrus scrolls pressed to his chest. The air was thick with incense and rumor. It was 942 BC, and the death of Pharaoh Osorkon I, the Libyan-descended ruler of Egypt’s Twenty-Second Dynasty, had set the city’s heart beating in anxious arrhythmia. Henut’s sandals whispered over limestone as he entered the Hall of Offerings. Statues of Amun loomed, painted eyes open and unblinking. Priests in linen skirts murmured prayers, their voices low and urgent, as if the gods themselves might be listening for heresy. Henut found his mentor, the aged priest Nebamun, hunched by the altar, arranging lotus blossoms with trembling hands. “Henut,” Nebamun croaked, “you bring the records?” Henut nodded, setting the scrolls upon a reed mat. “All the tithes from the southern granaries, as you asked.” Nebamun’s gaze, watery but still sharp, fixed on the young man. “The old order trembles. With Osorkon gone, who will shield us from the ambitions of the north? Sheshonq—his son—may claim the throne, but the people whisper. The gods’ favor is uncertain.” Henut hesitated, remembering what he’d overheard at the market: merchants from Tanis boasting of new alliances, priests of lesser gods angling for position. Even among the common folk, faith was shifting—some called for the old ways, others for reform. As dusk settled, the temple bells tolled. Nebamun pressed a withered hand to Henut’s shoulder. “Tonight, you will witness the rites for Osorkon’s soul. Attend closely, my son. The fate of Amun’s temple may depend on what you learn.” Outside, the city murmured in anticipation. Torches flickered along the avenue of sphinxes, and the air quivered with both grief and hope. Henut steeled himself, aware that his own beliefs—solid as the stone beneath his feet—would soon be tested by forces he could scarcely comprehend. —

Chapter 2: The Rites of Passing

The sanctuary was crowded, thick with the scent of kyphi and the rustle of ceremonial robes. High priests, their heads shaved and faces painted with ochre, chanted the ancient hymns that guided a pharaoh’s soul through the Duat, the perilous darkness between life and eternity. Henut stood among the novices, his heart pounding as the golden sarcophagus of Osorkon was borne aloft. Nebamun began the litany, his voice echoing off pillars inscribed with the deeds of kings past. “May Osorkon, born of Bastet, find favor with Amun-Ra. May his heart be weighed justly, and his Ka rejoice in the field of reeds.” As the procession circled the sanctuary, Henut noticed a new face among the acolytes—a young woman with kohl-rimmed eyes and a resolute jaw. She mouthed the prayers with precision, but her gaze was restless, scanning the priests and the crowd. When their eyes met, Henut felt a jolt of recognition—not from memory, but from a sense of shared uncertainty. The rites continued, elaborate and unnerving. At their climax, the priests poured libations of wine and milk upon the altar, beseeching Amun for guidance. Yet the god’s silence was palpable, a weight in the air. When the ceremony ended, Henut found himself drawn to the newcomer, who lingered by the pillars. “You are new to the temple,” he said softly. She inclined her head. “I am Merit, daughter of Horemheb. My father sent me from the Delta to serve Amun, as the times demand.” Henut studied her—her accent was northern, her posture proud. “Do you believe the gods hear us tonight?” he asked. Merit’s eyes, dark and steady, met his. “The gods are listening. But I wonder if we—those who serve—have forgotten how to listen in return.” Her words lingered as Henut left the sanctuary. Outside, the city was restless. The old king was dead, the priests uncertain, and Henut’s own faith—once unshakeable—now trembled in the shadow of change. —

Chapter 3: The Whispering Walls

Days passed, and Osorkon’s burial rites spilled into the streets. In the market, vendors spoke in hushed tones of unrest in Tanis, where Sheshonq II—Osorkon’s son—prepared to assume the double crown. Some claimed the gods favored his rule; others said the signs were ill-omened. Within the temple, tensions simmered. Nebamun called Henut to a private chamber, away from the prying ears of lesser priests. “We are being watched,” Nebamun whispered, voice brittle as papyrus. “The northern priests send spies among us. Some of our own have turned—offering prayers to Bastet, to Sekhmet, to gods not of Thebes.” Henut’s brow furrowed. “Can we not share in worship? Are we not all children of the gods?” Nebamun shook his head, fear sharpening his features. “There is power in unity. If Amun’s temple weakens, so too does Thebes. Already, the tribute for the poor has lessened. The people grow hungry while the northern priests feast.” Later, alone in the scriptorium, Henut struggled with his duties. He penned records by torchlight, but his thoughts wandered. Each time he saw Merit, she seemed burdened by secrets. Once, he caught her in the archives, fingers tracing forbidden hymns of Ma’at, goddess of truth, not often invoked in turbulent times. That night, as the moon crept above the pylons, Henut and Merit met by the sacred lake. “Tell me,” she urged, “do you truly believe the gods care who rules?” Henut hesitated. “I believe in order. In Ma’at. But perhaps we have placed too much faith in men who claim to speak for the gods.” Merit’s lips pressed together. “There are those who would use the gods for their own gain. My father sends word—the northern priests will soon demand tribute and loyalty from Thebes. We must choose: submit, or defend our temple’s independence.” The cool water shimmered between them. Henut realized that the struggle for power was not just between kings, but within the souls of those who served. —

Chapter 4: Fires in the Night

The city trembled with rumors. News arrived by boat: in Tanis, Sheshonq II had been crowned, but not all the nobles had pledged loyalty. Some southern lords whispered of revolt. Thebes braced for conflict. One evening, as Henut walked the temple corridors, the smell of smoke stung his nostrils. Shouts echoed from the granary. He raced outside to see flames licking the sky—grain stores, the temple’s lifeblood, were ablaze. Priests and laborers formed a frantic chain, passing buckets from the Nile. Henut joined them, his arms aching, sweat stinging his eyes. Amid the chaos, he spotted a figure slipping away—a priest with the blue sash of Bastet’s order. After the fire was quenched, Nebamun gathered the senior priests. “This was no accident. The northern priests seek to cripple us—without grain, we cannot feed the people or honor Amun.” A fierce debate erupted. Some called for appeasement, others for defiance. Merit stood, her voice clear. “If we bow now, Thebes will never rise again. We must call on the people—their loyalty is our true strength.” Henut watched, torn. He admired her courage, but feared open conflict. That night, as he patched the scorched granary walls, Merit found him. “You are uncertain,” she said. He nodded. “I fear for the temple. For the people. But I fear more what will happen if we lose ourselves in the struggle.” She placed a hand on his. “Faith is not obedience. It is the courage to speak truth, even when the gods are silent.” The fire had not only gutted the granary—it had kindled resolve in both their hearts. —

Chapter 5: The Assembly of Faith

The next morning, word spread that Sheshonq’s envoys were approaching Thebes. Nebamun convened the temple council in the hypostyle hall, its columns rising like a petrified forest. Henut stood at Merit’s side. The hall was packed—priests, artisans, even farmers pressed in, anxious to hear what would become of their city. A hush fell as the envoys entered: two priests in northern regalia, their faces expressionless. They recited the new pharaoh’s decree—tribute must be doubled, all temples to acknowledge Tanis as the seat of divine authority. Rebellion would mean ruin. Nebamun’s voice shook with age but not with fear. “Amun has watched over Thebes for generations. We honor the pharaoh, but we will not forsake our god.” Murmurs rippled through the crowd. The envoy’s lips curled. “The god of Tanis is also mighty. Will you defy the will of the Two Lands?” Merit stepped forward, bold as a lioness. “Faith is not a prize to be won by threats. The people of Thebes will decide whom they serve.” The envoys withdrew, promising retribution. Tension crackled in the hall. Some priests fumed, others trembled. Henut found his voice at last. “If we divide ourselves, we are lost. We must remember Ma’at—justice, balance, truth. Let us seek counsel, not only from the gods, but from the people.” That night, the temple doors were thrown open. Citizens streamed in, bearing offerings and prayers. For the first time in weeks, Henut sensed hope mingling with fear—a fragile faith sustained not by decree, but by community. —

Chapter 6: The Choice at Dawn

The city awoke to the sound of distant drums—Sheshonq’s soldiers had arrived at the outskirts, their banners snapping in the wind. Thebes braced for siege. Within the temple, the priests argued fiercely. Some pleaded for negotiation, others demanded resistance. Nebamun, frail but resolute, called for silence. “We must act, but not from fear. Let us present ourselves before Sheshonq’s men—not as supplicants, but as servants of Ma’at, guardians of truth.” Henut, Merit, and a handful of priests donned their finest linen and carried the temple’s sacred emblems. In the pale dawn, they processed through the city gates, flanked by townsfolk who had come in solidarity. At the encampment, Sheshonq’s general regarded them warily. Merit spoke first, her voice clear. “We honor the new pharaoh. But Thebes will not forget her gods. We offer tribute, but not our souls.” The general hesitated. He had expected cowed priests, not a city united in faith. After a tense silence, he nodded. “Tell your people: as long as you honor the pharaoh, Thebes may keep her god.” Relief washed over the assembly. Henut felt the weight of fear lift, replaced by a cautious gratitude. The city would endure—its faith intact, its people unbowed. That night, as the drums faded, Henut and Merit sat by the lake. “We stood together,” she said softly. “Perhaps that is what the gods ask of us—not blind obedience, but the courage to choose.” Henut gazed at the stars reflected in the water, feeling, for the first time, that the gods might indeed be listening. —

Chapter 7: The Harvest of Faith

In the weeks that followed, Thebes rebuilt. The granaries were restored, the temple’s altars rededicated. Though Sheshonq’s rule was acknowledged, the priests of Amun retained their authority—by the will of the people, not the whim of kings. Henut’s duties continued, but with new purpose. He and Merit worked side by side, teaching the children of laborers to read and recite the hymns. In the market, the people spoke with pride of their city’s resolve. Nebamun, frail but content, called Henut to his side. “You have learned what I could not teach,” he murmured. “That faith is not stone or gold, but the courage to stand for what is just.” As the harvest festival approached, Thebes resounded with music and laughter. On the temple steps, Henut and Merit watched the city celebrate, their hands entwined. “Our gods are many,” Merit whispered, “but our hope is one.” As the sun set, bathing the city in gold, Henut understood at last. The true power of faith was not in submission, but in the strength to choose—together, in the face of uncertainty. And so, as Thebes entered a new era, the song of its people rose above the river, a testament to the enduring bond between belief and courage. —

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